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All Deviations


a/n: personal. fragile. dark. read slowly. and deliberately.



there aren't better moments
than
when two become one

and

disaster ensues.

a clash of after shower warmth
meeting
a nakedness in sordid winter

instances of vulnerability
when base values are attacked
foundations being tested

with a bowed head
tears will meet
the blood dripping between bruised legs

endless
moments of

.windy clear summer afternoon
.encounters with the deepest love
.raged clashes on different views
.crying moments of inescapable shame

hours and seconds
years and weeks
always flowing forward
overwhelming
as the ocean waves crushes a butterfly
washing away sand and land

in the crystal of my personal consciousness
arrays of the BRIGHTEST warmest lights
appear cracked against
hues of humanity's darkest poisons

in love and hate
clear as tricking mountain waters
passively kept at the most crippling levels
a needed coexistence of self destructive natures
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taken from my lj. (if you want to question my identity, note me.)

it probably makes no sense. that's all right. cause that's me: illogical pile of fail.

©FightingSoul, Illy.
No posting or using without my permission.

p.s. usability of HTML on dA begins to be extremely questionable *glowers*

p.s.s. mature warning removed because [1] 98% says kids ain't reading cryptological sh*t. and [2] no one's reading it. (: [3] cause censorship is usually telling a man he can't handle baby food.
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~stalker-in-training:iconstalker-in-training: Apr 26, 2008, 3:16:12 AM
Vivid, intense images come to mind when I read that.

*hug*

What triggered this bout of emotions?

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Being a crabby bitch is part of my charm.
~FightingSoul:iconFightingSoul: Apr 26, 2008, 10:16:34 AM
only an illiterate would not be able to picture the words in their mind's eye. (:

there is no trigger. just.. late night/early morning 'musings'. taking time to realize and revel in the diversity residing in me.

uhm. side note. *sways* 325ml of :beer: apparently drunks me. or maybe i'm just tired. it's 01:12. but wow. lucid but vision is like.. swimming. cool. i'm going to bed before passing out at here. like. the ground is moving. which is awesome. only the thoughts are still lucid. *frowns* need somehow to not think.
~stalker-in-training:iconstalker-in-training: Apr 26, 2008, 5:49:35 PM
No, no, lots of people lack imagination and the capacity to decipher the meanings behind simple words.

325ml of WHAT? Vodka?

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Being a crabby bitch is part of my charm.
~FightingSoul:iconFightingSoul: Apr 26, 2008, 11:23:44 PM
:c so true.

beer beer beer the icon/emote thingy for beer is :beer:. i might just have been tired last night haha *sweatdrop*
~AntiqueGuard:iconAntiqueGuard: May 9, 2008, 9:55:38 PM
I'm so of that 2% XD

Wow.. That's it. Wow.

And you say that I'm a good writer. D:

Not only the words that you put together sound wonderful, but they contemplate eachother perfectly.

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...And then the insane start to talk..
~FightingSoul:iconFightingSoul: May 10, 2008, 8:56:40 AM
2% of which bits?? (°w°

D: you are a good writer! i lurve everything you posted on dA and write in RP.

(^///^ i'm totally flattered my fav authoress complemented meh. ♥ it was ttly unplanned & messy emotions based.. XD
~AntiqueGuard:iconAntiqueGuard: May 10, 2008, 7:54:42 PM
THE SMRT BITS??? :ohnoes:

Me? Authoress? Fav?!
WHEN DID THAT HAPPEN?! *gawp* O__O;
Wow.. I'm flattered that you're flattered! ///

THEN. This concludes it!
I need to get back to writing!
Yes. yes. ♥♥♥

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...And then the insane start to talk..
~FightingSoul:iconFightingSoul: May 12, 2008, 1:04:00 AM
smrt..? *wonders if that's a typo of "smart"*(o_o

since.. i read snow, cyanide then white chocolate and ever after..? xD

:heart:PLEASE DO:heart:! (whatever happened to continuing white chocolate anyway? (o_o )
~AntiqueGuard:iconAntiqueGuard: May 14, 2008, 8:21:06 PM
Um..? i doon't know. Laziness? XD
Likely.

I could've lost interest in the story, though.. :/ I can't tell the difference..

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...And then the insane start to talk..